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Talk => Books and Writers => Poetry => Topic started by: Well Behaved Lady on June 22, 2017, 01:57:18 PM

Title: Mutual Respect
Post by: Well Behaved Lady on June 22, 2017, 01:57:18 PM
I watch and observe his naked form
The door ajar inviting me in
His touch one of familiarity
I remain hidden respecting the view

Partially disrobed
I ponder my own form
My desire him
My touch equal to his

A deathly silence broken by a murmur, discovered
The gap of light now cast upon me
We sit and watch feet away
A mutual admiration within our reach

We watch and observe
Eyes full of lust
A need to reach out and touch
A difficult restraint

Our need for fulfillment matched
Our desire for each other unequal
Our thoughts in sync
Our release together

(http://i.imgur.com/sPMTmuk.png)



Title: Re: Mutual Respect
Post by: MintJulie on June 22, 2017, 03:23:16 PM
I loved this.   Thank you WBLady!  

I also like your signature (just noticed it).

 :emot_kiss:
Title: Re: Mutual Respect
Post by: MissBarbara on June 22, 2017, 04:14:03 PM
Quote from: MintJulie on June 22, 2017, 03:23:16 PM

I loved this.   Thank you WBLady!  



Me, too!

I love this line:

A need to reach out and touch
A difficult restraint
Title: Re: Mutual Respect
Post by: phtlc on June 22, 2017, 11:23:13 PM
I need to catch my breath
Title: Re: Mutual Respect
Post by: IdleBoast on June 22, 2017, 11:40:31 PM
Wubble, these are more than just scribblings, you are a genuine poet.



Title: Re: Mutual Respect
Post by: vinney on June 23, 2017, 12:18:44 AM
Thought provoking words... the imagery is vivid... fantastic... woo Wubble...
Title: Re: Mutual Respect
Post by: Katiebee on June 23, 2017, 03:49:53 AM
Sigh…

You made me wish my girl was with me.
Title: Re: Mutual Respect
Post by: Well Behaved Lady on June 23, 2017, 10:21:16 AM
Quote from: MintJulie on June 22, 2017, 03:23:16 PM
I loved this.   Thank you WBLady!  

I also like your signature (just noticed it).

 :emot_kiss:


Thanks Julie

Quote from: MissBarbara on June 22, 2017, 04:14:03 PM
Quote from: MintJulie on June 22, 2017, 03:23:16 PM

I loved this.   Thank you WBLady! 



Me, too!

I love this line:

A need to reach out and touch
A difficult restraint



Holding back is the worst feeling, in so many situations. Thanks for the comment and taking the time to read my words once again.

Quote from: phtlc on June 22, 2017, 11:23:13 PM
I need to catch my breath

Well I never took you for someone who might read poetry, thanks for taking the time to comment.

Quote from: IdleBoast on June 22, 2017, 11:40:31 PM
Wubble, these are more than just scribblings, you are a genuine poet.


IB you flatter me, it's amazing what can happen when reality and fantasy cross and for some reason the words I write seem to relay it well.
I publish all my poetry on a poetry website, so lovers of poetry get to see my words elsewhere and I seem to be getting it right there too.

Quote from: vinney on June 23, 2017, 12:18:44 AM
Thought provoking words... the imagery is vivid... fantastic... woo Wubble...

Thanks Vinney, once again I appreciate the time you take to comment and read my words

Quote from: Katiebee on June 23, 2017, 03:49:53 AM
Sigh…

You made me wish my girl was with me.

She's in your heart, hold onto that x
Title: Re: Mutual Respect
Post by: phtlc on June 27, 2017, 07:14:03 AM
Quote from: Well Behaved Lady on June 23, 2017, 10:21:16 AM

Well I never took you for someone who might read poetry, thanks for taking the time to comment.



I've never been into poetry, but that one had an impact. I've always liked the ability to convey a whole story or image with very few words and you did that here. Thank you for writing it.