Disclaimer: this is a work of fiction, anything done is Dom/sub should be discussed and agreed before trying anything, between consenting adultsDommed In Puerto Rico
Puerto Rico is a normal place to the people who live here. Of course, we see it every
day. For people that come to visit it can be a paradise. I still see it as the paradise it
is. So, I invited my friend from the KB to join me for a vacation with her family.
I was really excited once she gave me the answer that she was coming over. Days
before everything is set, hotel rooms booked, snorkeling adventures set, the house
ready to accommodate her and her family, but above all, a girls night out bar hopping
in Old San Juan, with permission to stay over night there so we don't have to drive
back drunk... Oh Yeah!!!
So, on the day of arrival, I went to the airport to get Elcie and her family. I'm so
excited that she is coming and I don't mean in the sexual sense... but I can always
dream. As the people come out of the terminal I can see her red hair and I know it's
her... she and I exchanged pictures so we could recognize each other. We've been good
friends from the beginning. You see...she is a sweetheart, caring, very hot, and
recently we found that we have so much in common. The sub side of her has come to
show, and we both are fine with it. I raise my hand waving at her and we walk toward
each other and hug. She smells of jasmine. We say hi, she introduces me to her
husband and kids and we are off to our vacation.
The first few days we went to the beach, a place called Gilligan's Island... it's a group
of little islands, with crystal clear waters and white sands... perfect for the kids to
enjoy and a lot of hiding places for the adults to have more fun than just enjoy the
water. While at the beach, I grabbed Elcie's hand and took her to the other side of the
island. She looked like an angel in her two piece swim suit, I like to see her move. It's
so sensual. I can't help staring... and I think she likes that I do. I've never been with a
woman, but if I had the opportunity it would be with her... she sits on one of the roots
of the mangrove closer to the water... she is looking at the ocean and I get closer to
her. I brush her hair to the side and wait for her reaction. She looks up to me and
smiles sweetly, so I kiss behind her ear, and keep kissing my way down her shoulders,
and stop assessing the moment, but she just looks at me expectant. Taking the hint, I
go to the front and caress her check and lean in to kiss her. She meets my kiss and it
sends a voltage through my body... her lips are soft and sweet. The kiss deepens and I
start kissing my way down her jaw, neck and between her breasts. I take them out of
the fabric that cover them and I graze my teeth all the way to her left nipple while my
hand finds her right and pinches it. She moans a little to loud and I stopped, scared
that maybe I pinched too hard. When I looked up, she leaned her head back and tells
me, "Please, don't stop". So I lower myself and go back to her nipples... my hand
brushes her abdomen and her back. I can't believe I'm doing this, but it's so hot. My
hands are everywhere.While I get on my knees my mouth and tongue travel across her
belly and I nibble on her pussy through the bottom of her swimsuit. I moved her
swimsuit to the side and flicked my tongue on her clit and I got a moan from her. I
grab her and pull her to the sand and she lays on her back, and I go back to her pussy.
I lick and graze my teeth on her clit, and I can see her hands buried on the white sand.
She tastes glorious as I push my tongue inside her hole and go back to her clit. My
hands on her legs.... touching....rubbing....squeezing. My taste buds picking up her
juices mixed with the salty water, and it made for a tasty combination. I felt her tense
and she lets out a moan and then, I felt her shaking. Her legs where trembling and, as
I got up, I could see her satisfied look on her face. She opened her eyes and said “I
think I should return the favor". As I sat next to her, the hubbies came... and I
whispered, "Guess I'll wait for the girls night out", and turned and smiled at our
hubbies.
We all went back to the house and got cleaned and ready. We where leaving for our
girls night out in a couple of hours. I had bought the perfect little black dress and
stiletto heels for this night. I walked out to meet Elcie at the living room and she was
wearing a tight short skirt with a hot looking silver tank top and high heel boots. She
looks like a goddess. We said our good byes to the hubbies and the kids and we were
off to our girls night out. The drive to Old San Juan was hot, her hand was between my
legs and she made me cum like crazy. It was a miracle we made it alive to the city.
We got to the hotel made ourselves at home in the room. We kissed a bit and her lips
tasted quite amazing.
We called a cab and got to our first bar. As soon as we got in, guys where on us like
sharks. I liked the effect we had on them. We had drinks, danced, but there was
something missing. We left, as it wasn't as fun as we thought it was gonna be. We
walked hand in hand to a new dance place... an all girl dance place. The bouncer just
let us in by looking at us. It was good for the ego looking at envious glares of the girls
on the line. The music was loud and alluring, I grabbed her hand and led her to the
dance floor.
As the music continued, we moved to the rhythm. Our bodies brushing against each
other, our hands on each others bodies. From the bar, a young lady looked at us
attentively. Her full lips half parted and brushing the rim of the wine glass against
them. Her eyes, penetrating, bore into us. Her face, demanding, revealing nothing.
She places her glass on the bar and walks towards us with a purpose. She starts to
move against both of us and pulls Elcie to one of her legs and me to the other. We both
reach and touch her as we sway to the music rubbing our bodies against hers. This
mysterious lady grabs Elcie's head and kisses her. And then turns to me and kisses me.
She feels so strong... her hands roaming both our bodies... I can feel myself getting
wet with excitement. Her hands strong, leading us, taking charge, directing us, making
us sway with her at her rhythm. The other girls look at us but we don't care. She leans
in between us and says, I'm Katie. Is there a place where we can go?” Elcie and I look
at each other our eyes gleaming with excitement. I look down and answer “ We have a
hotel room near here. When I look up, I can see a grin on her lips, and I feel the
clenching of my insides. I walk to the bar shockingly and write the address down on a
napkin. I go back to the dance floor and Elcie and her are engaged in a deep kiss. I get
more excited as I look at them. Katie turns to me and I give her the napkin with our
hotel address and room number. Katie says, I'm here for an overnight stop. My cruise
is leaving tomorrow, but I would like to have some fun with you ladies. I have to go
get some stuff for the cruise, but I'll see you in half an hour at your room. As she says
that she gives us a wicked grin that makes my heart stutter. She turns and she leaves.
Elcie and I leave the club after that and our excitement gets the best of us. I've never
been with a woman before, well except you. You are my first.” Elcie says, Don't worry.
There is always a first time for everything. It's 2:00 am and we're still sober. So we
decide to raid the mini bar. I need some alcohol to steady my nerves.
There is a knock on the door, I look at Elcie and walk towards it. I open the door and
there she is. Katie, hot and sexy Katie. Looking ravishing in her tight black pants and
white blouse and corset on top. I stumble out of the way and she comes in. It is now
in the light that I can really appreciate her beauty. She has long flowing brown hair,
eyes that can light up a city, and a presence that can make you tremble. She smiles
sweetly at us and says, “I didn't catch your name's Elcie, says I'm Elcie and this sweet
lady here it's Ritzy. She cocks her head and asks: “Elcie? Ritzy? By any chance
DemonDelight and Latina?” And that's when it hits me “Katiebee?” She smiles and says
What are tho odds? Two of my favorite Ladies... and she turns to me and her gaze
hits me, and I'm on my knees instantly. I can't see her, but she has a smile of
satisfaction on her face. She walks to Elcie and stands behind her, she whispers
something in her ear and too she is a pile of mush on the floor next to me. Katie then
walks to her duffel bag and pulls out something that looks like a tube, then she walks
to the bathroom door stands on her toes and hooks the tube on the higher part of the
doorway. I realize its a pull up bar... OMG, what is she planning to do with that... then
she goes back and gets a set of hot pink leather handcuffs with with a chain... she puts
one on my right wrist and pull me from the floor, I follow her and she tells me put my
hands up, I do with out any questions. She gets the loose hand cuff on top of the bar
and ties it to my other wrist. Just being tied up there got me so wet. She looked at me
admiring her job. Katie then walked to Elcie and said “I have something special for
you and with that she walked back to her duffel bag and got out a riding crop and a
dog collar with a chain. She then, walked to Elcie and told her to get on her knees. She
flicked the crop on her nipples getting them hard with each hit. Elcie's head went back
and a moan scarped her luscious lips. Then she placed the collar around the neck of Elcie
and hooked the chain to it... “Elcie, listen to me now, you have the power to stop this
at any moment. You can say yellow if is getting to much, and red for stop. The same
goes for you Ritzy, OK?”-- NOW Elcie I want you to crawl toward Ritzy...slowly. With
every step Elcie took, Katie would strike her on the ass with the crop. Her ass checks
getting pink by the abuse, but on Elcie's eyes only desire can be seen... My eyes where
set on Elcie crawling to me, my mouth going dry by the view. Katie had the chain still
on one hand while the other was working the crop. Elcie was right in front of me when
Katie said: stop and pulled a little on the chain. “Elcie with out getting up from your
hands and knees I want you to use your teeth to peel off Ritzy's panties. Ritzy, you are
not allowed to help her in any way. I don't want you to move at all. I felt more than I
saw Elcie's lips and teeth on my belly. She grabbed the lace panties and started to pull
them down, I could not help but to wiggle a little and Katie hit me on my breast with
the crop, so I stopped... It was not painful at all more than just it was exhilarating. It
felt right. Elcie, kept pulling at my undergarment and was passing right on my lips. The
mixture of the excitement and her breath where wreaking havoc on my insides... my
head dropped backwards and I moaned... down my legs I could feel her nose rubbing
as she went down and my juices started flowing more... with out any warning swish
and the crop bit into my other breast... I hadn't notice that I moved, but that hit Bright
my first orgasm... I didn't know I could cum that way... the panties where on the floor
and Katie said Elcie I want you to make her cum again, lick her from feet to pussy and
eat her until she cums... her tongue on my skin was heaven. Feeling her licking my
legs and reaching my clit I was moaning and squirming. Katie then started to whip me
with the crop and I could not keep quiet I love the feeling of hopelessness I was
feeling... the bit of the crop on my tits making them pink and making my nipples perk
up was like a dream come true. I had fantasize about it a thousand times, but never
thought it could feel this good... little welt where staring to show on my perfect breast
and I didn't care... they were right for me. Katie then, stop hitting me and started to
hit Elcie between her legs. I could feel Elcie's breathing quicken, so I think she was
enjoying it as much as I was. It was magic, seen this outstanding lady still all dressed
and this beautiful angel on the floor working on my pussy, that with a loud groan I felt
myself go again. I was now hanging on my wrist cause my legs had give out on me.
Katie then pulled the chain on Elcie's collar and led her to the bed, she told her, Get on
the bed. Elcie complied at once. Katie then went to her big duffel bag again and got
some nylon white rope and a CD. She went back to the bed, placed the rope on the bed
and went to the small radio we had brought with us and inserted the CD. She hit play
and the atmosphere was instantly filled with Leonard Cohen's music. His voice tinkling
my senses, as I watch Katie tie Elcies wrist to the bed headboard and leans in a sucks
sensually on both of Elcie's nipples. Then, grabs the crop again and hits her on both her
breasts. Walks, back to me undoes one of my cuffs, kisses me deeply and massages my
wrists. Then, she walks me to the bed, and tell me, Lay next to her.” I do what I'm
told without hesitation, I want to comply with everything she asks. She passes the
chain through the same place where she tied Elcie so we are very close together. She
get of the bed and takes her clothes off, she is wearing red and black bra and matching
panties. She leaves her boots on, and she looks ravishing, riding crop in hand and a
wicked smile on her lushous lips. She walks to Elcie's side of the bed and swishes the
crop on her tits and quickly on mine. The bit of it a little more forceful than last time,
but equally enjoyable. I know the safe words, so I feel safe. I feel my nipples hardening
with each bit of the crop, my eyes start to water a bit... but I don't want her to stop.
Katie sees my eyes and stops, I say... “please don't stop”. Elcie is next to me and she
seems stronger than I am. Her lips parted and enjoying every bit of it. Katie stops all
together and I feel a tinge of sadness when she does. I feel like I'm not behaving like a
good sub, but then Katie says, “you are doing good Ritzy, and you too Elcie”. Its like
she can read my mind. “I'm bored of the crop, turn on your bellies, be right back”.
Elcie and I comply a little awkard but we managed it between fits of laughter. I turn my
head and Katie is carrying two floggers one on each hand. She reaches the bed and
places one on my nightstand and walks to the other side and says “ok ladies, again do
you remember the safe words” Elcie and I nod. She raises the flogger and brings it
down on elcie's buttocks and I hear her soft moan and I can't wait for my turn. Katie's
eyes gleam and my insides raise havoc again, the sound of the flogger, the music, the
atmosfere, Elcie's moans of pleasure, all together is intoxicating. She hits her a little
harder everytime, until I hear Elcie say, “yellow” and Katie stops at once. Walks to the
dresser picks up a bottle of body cream, walks back and rubs some on Elcie's ass very
carefully and soft. Then, she walks to my side and picks up the flogger and starts
working on me... The fist couples of hits don't sting at all, they feel wonderful. I moan
on every hit. As the flogging continues it gets more and more intense. I can feel my
ass cheeks warm. They most be looking kind of pink. Still I like the sting. Harder she
floggs me and I feel myself going into a pleasure rush. It feels divine. The flogger hits
harder and I hear myself saying: “yellow”. Katie stops at once, losen our ties and gets
the body cream and rubs my ass. Then, Katie, gets on the bed between Elcie and me,
with the cream she rubs our asses and our backs. Leonard Cohen still singing in the
background. I'm in a plane of pleasure that I cannot describe. I feel Katies warmth next
to me, one her hands on my body, I can hear Elcie's soft moans and she enjoys the
rubbing too. She is taking care of us. Then, she rubs our wrists in turn making sure we
are not hurt. I turn on my side and look up at Katie and lean in and start to kiss her
belly. Elcie is working on Katie's other side. Our bodies intertwine with each other. All
three of us one body. My hand rubs Katie through her panties, my mouth, sucking on
her nipple through her bra. I want to worship her body, every inch of it. I want to make
her cum and please her. Elcie is working on her breasts and kissing her neck and lips,
as I gently take her undergarments off. As I slide her panties down I trail kiss her legs,
I then get between her legs and trail my way back up, till I reach her inner thighs, then
I lick my way up to her clit. Her juices are flowing and I look up and Elcie has her bra
off, and its licking her nipples. Katie's eye are closed and her face is one of pleasure. I
go back down and I work on her, teasing her clit, touching her legs. I reach up and
start to touch Elcie...I get my hand between her legs and I flick her and put my finger
in her. I look for her sweet spot. That place that drives us crazy. I finger her as she
kisses Katie and I lick. Then, in a mess of hands, tongues and juices I feel Katie is
reaching her point of no return, and on my finger I feel that Elcie has gone too... I
bring them both to climax, its music to my ears hearing them both as they reach it. I
go back to my side of the bed and we fall asleep in each others arms.
The phone ringing brings me out of my hot, sexy dream. I reach and answer... “hello”--
“Yes, ma'am this is the front desk with the wake up call. And to let you know there is a
present being sent to your room as we speak” – “Thank You” I answer and I turn
around. Elcie and I are alone on the bed. Sadness hits my chest as I look for her duffle
bag, but its gone. Elcie's face mirror my own, and then the knock on the door. I grab a
robe from the bathroom and answer. There on the door a hotel worker with two
buquets of red roses and a letter. I take them both and go back to bed. Hand one to
Elcie and sit opening the letter.
Ritzy and Elcie:
My two favorite ladies. Sorry to run on you this morning but my ship is leaving.
Thank you for a wonderful night. Wish it could have gone for longer. I guess I'll be
seeing you on KB.
Love,
KatieWe showered and left Old San Juan with the memory of our girls night out, and the
thought and sweet night of being dommed in Puerto Rico.
(sorry if there are any mistakes)