I read in the new recently that most women do not like these words; Moist, squirt, panties, chunky, curd, and flap.
I use the first three regularly (sorry ladies)!
Seriously, women are men have different tastes when it comes to porn. On film, men typically don't care much about the plot, they want to get to right to the hot, nasty sex and the 'money-shot' - with detailed views of High Definition images.
Women, typically place more emphasis on the story line and want a slow build up to a more sensual lovemaking, which can still get quite raunchy, but leveraging the viewers imagination, without close-up views of 'moist' genitalia.
I hope that these statements do not generate any ill-will. 'Men are from Mars, and women are from Venus' and we have different sexual tastes when it comes to pornography. Some females in the porn industry even created a company to make movies more geared to women viewers.
As a male, I tend to write very graphically and put in a lot of details, especially to describe into the culmination of the sexual act; exaggerating desires, the length and intensity of orgasms, and the amount and forcefulness of ejaculate - to humbly attempt to take my readers, and myself, on a thrilling roller-coaster ride to orgasmic bliss.
I think of erotic writing like Garrison Keillor's Lake Wobegon, "where all the women are perpetually horny, the men are all studs, and the genitals are above average."
In keeping with the theme of 'worst lines' - not every penis is gigantic, not every set of breasts are enormous, and, I sometimes take issue with the word 'copious' - it is a perfectly good word, but not 'dirty' enough when used to describe ejaculate.
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