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Offline Well Behaved Lady

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on: January 13, 2017, 02:41:09 PM
Naked at his behest
A willing compliant
On my knees
In the hallway
I'm such a tease

I am his slut behind locked doors
He will in time, take me on all fours
I take his cock as I only can
I adore his taste and how he feels

I crawl away and beckon him so
Splayed for his taking
Slow and tentatively he savours my core
Afterall I am his whore

I feel his tongue feather my sex
My arousal pools with his touch
Once then again, again and again

Finally fucking me on all fours
Tenderness gone
Use me as I desire
Momentarily spent on the floor
Fantasies fulfilled once more.






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Reply #1 on: January 13, 2017, 03:00:17 PM

Naked at his behest
A willing compliant
On my knees
In the hallway
I'm such a tease

I am his slut behind locked doors
He will in time, take me on all fours
I take his cock as I only can
I adore his taste and how he feels

I crawl away and beckon him so
Splayed for his taking
Slow and tentatively he savours my core
Afterall I am his whore

I feel his tongue feather my sex
My arousal pools with his touch
Once then again, again and again

Finally fucking me on all fours
Tenderness gone
Use me as I desire
Momentarily spent on the floor
Fantasies fulfilled once more.





I LOVE this!

I especially love the mutuality of desire/action. Especially the line, "Use me as I desire" (i.e. not "as you desire").







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Offline Katiebee

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Reply #2 on: January 13, 2017, 07:21:37 PM
This is a very erotic poem!

The imagery is a excellent and I can put myself in the speakers place, changing the gender of the significant other. I felt a tremor of excitement and desire, an emotional need well up in me as I read it.

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Reply #3 on: January 13, 2017, 07:58:16 PM
Just...  Woo!



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Reply #4 on: January 14, 2017, 02:50:13 PM
Thank you for taking the time to read and comment.  Poetry often gets overlooked here and it may surprise some that most of my poetry is reality based. MissB has commented on some of my previous poetry but seeing Katie and IB appreciation was a pleasant surprise. Thanks to MintJulie also for the woo.



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Reply #5 on: January 15, 2017, 12:44:55 AM
Hot words WBL... such an erotic and enjoyable poem... Wprthy of a woo or two at least...

vinney

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