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The device (MF, scifi, non-cons)

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on: February 02, 2022, 11:41:26 AM
This is a work of fiction. The author doesn't condone any form of rape or uncons sex.



The device

Sam had waited for hours to get into the shop. He got one of the last devices, paid about a thousant dollars for it and secretly carried it home. Sam was 29 years old, a programmer for special software and used to hack soft and hardware.  He had found that device on the internet, advertised as a remote controller for technics, like some kind of brain remote for smart devices. But he knew, that there was a lot more potentional.

At home he unpacked it, and only minutes later he had loosend the last screw to get into the device. The technical design was very simple, most of it was included inside a massive chip in the center of the mainboard. But he found, what he hoped for. A service connector, not documented by the manual, was his gate into the device. He connected his computer to the device and startet his software, trying differend ways to get the connection working.

At first he only got to the low level information layer, collecting some information about the used software and the serial number, after some time he was able to get into the driver level, which was secured by a simple password. The programmers had been lazy and used the same passwort for every security barrier installed on that level. He switched through the folders and found pre installed software for remote controlling smart home devices, for televisions and A/V receiver. He even found the software for a deep brain connection into the internet and brain chat software similar to skype, but instead of using a camera, the divice used a selfimage to present yourself to your chat partner. He searched deeper and started a scan for hidden files and folders and then he found a folder on next level, that was not only secured but hidden in a ghostdrive, like some of the programmers didn't wanted users to find this.

His attention was awakened when he tried to open that hidden folder, using the same password again. But it was locked by a second barrier, a biometric check. Trying different ways to brake through, he failed again and again. He was close to quit for the day when it flashed through his mind, that perhaps he had to be connected to the device to unlock that barrier. Seconds later the collar was attached around his neck and he felt some kind needles been pushed into his neck. It didn't hurt, but he felt something connecting to his neural system, like a new part of his body been activated he just hadn't been aware of. Seconds later he was able to unlock the folder and was grinning. Yes, it was the same password again. He had found the master admin folder, including remote configuration of other devices and mind controlling other users. There were a few dozends of apps with only cryptic names like NX229B2, not telling anything about the program but also apps with their useful names like 'diagnostics' or 'connection reset'.

He used one of the software, it called itself 'radar'. Sam used his brain to scan the area for other devices but only found one, its signal strength near to the point of disconnection. It was a girl at the end of the street, using the device to brain chat with her boyfriend. Sam logged in to that chat in ghostmode and was able to spy their chat. They were talking about school that day, their homework and how to get away from it soon. The girl had a nice voice and Sam got interested in how she might look like. Sometimes he was able to get a picture of the girl, giving the remote device the order to send a video signal through the connection, but only for a second or two. Sam didn't knew if those pics were sent to her friend, too, but he didn't even cared about.

By the time the girl and her friend got closer to end their chat and Sam send signals to the remote device of the girl to prevent her from logging out. When the boy said good bye he disconnected and left the girl alone in the chat room, unable to disconnect at the moment. The girl paniced a little bit, trying to open the menu and disconnect from the chat room. She called for help, screamed as loud as she could but she was inprisoned inside the device, inside the connection she had established by her own with her friend.

Sam switched through the programs inside the admin folder looking for a program to use on his victim. He just opend one of the cryptic programs when she suddenly disappered. Damn, he thought, perhaps that was a remote disconnect or perhaps somebody must have disconnected the device from her.

Sam reentered the scan mode and found a new device, attached to a guy he knew. He was a known pervert and Sam linked into his internet session. He was watching porn of young girls been fucked by men, in fact child porn. Sam hated what he saw and entered the remote control mode. He instructed the guys device to send his entire collection of porn to the local police and left him locked inside his session. Two hours later the police took him away in cuffs, collecting all of his hardware with him.

Sam was proud of this but unsatisfied. For sure, he hated the child porn pervert, but he himself would like to fuck some teen girl, at legal age for sure. Scanning the area for a few times again he found no more active devices and logged out by himeself. He thought about how to get a better connection to more devices and searched for the antenna. There was no antenna and by invetigating into the sourcecode of the main operating system of the device he found out, that the device was conneting to others over the normal internet, limited by some kind of regional cells. He searched in the admin settings for a value for the maximum range but found nothing. In the source code was an option but it was written in a strange encryption. He needed about two hours to decrypt it and he set the range to one mile around him.

Sam entered the admin mode again and started the radar, scanning for other devices and now he found over hundred active users in that mile radius. He scaned the users and filtered them by gender and age. He found three teens that would suit his favorites and tried to connect to them one by one. The first one was doing her homework, lazyly listening to music through the device. He tried to get a picture from her but the device was in passive mode and he couldn't send signals to it. So he lost interest in her and connected to the second girl.

She was actively videochatting to an old man, perhaps her father or grandfather. She was not looking what he searched for and Sam left the chat only seconds after he entered it. Last chance was the third girl and he found the jackpot he was searching for. She had an open profile, Louisa Martens, and was just using a mirror for making some hot pictures for somebody. She was only wearing some hot lingerie in black with lots of lace, only hiding the essentiel. Sam locked her session and prevented her from logging out. Louisa made some more pictures and Sam set the device to save them all on his memory card. Sam was spectating the girl and waited for her to move on. A few minutes later Louisa removed her bra, setting free a wonderful air of C-cup breasts. Perfectly rounded and with dark areolas, her nipples standing out proudly. Her hands cupped her breasts on their own, her thumps moved over her nipples. Louisa felt some kind of hot and she put her head back while plying with her breasts.

Sam was still in ghostmode and watched the show Louisa was giving to him. He had already switched on the record function and took a video of her show when he hoped she would even remove the last piece of clothes. Louisa took her time and looked over her shoulders several times as if she knew that she was not alone, but a few minutes later she wasn't able to resists anymore. Slowly she removed her panties and revealed a wonderfull pussy, perfectly shaved. Louisa put a hand over her public mound and Sam watched her starting to play with herself. A moment later Louisa opened her legs and used two of her fingers to play with her cunt. Still watching the show in ghostmode Sam got really close and loved what he saw. Sam got the indescribable urge to touch the girl but he didn't wanted to leave his cover of ghostmode. He tried to touch her body but his hand went right through her skin.

Sam switched through the admin apps and found an app called 'total brain fuck' but with no further discription. Curious about that name he started it and set the target address on that girl and a second later her eyes went black and she stopped in motion. Another second later he felt himself teleported into her body and he was able to move her body, to feel what she felt and to speak with her voice. He looked around her room and tried to walk. He used her hand and moved it between her legs, touching her cunt he felt it like it was his own. Damn that was strange, he thought, her cunt was hyper sensitive and while he rubbed her clit with her hand he felt the sensation raising in her body. He stopped rubbing her clit and pushed a finger into her cunt and the feeling was strange that something was pushing inside. But at the same time it felt great and added into the raising orgasm Sam was giving Louisa with her own hand. Only seconds later he felt her orgasms as his own and Sam was overwhelmed how a female orgasm was feeling like.

Sam moved two fingers into her cunt after the orgasm subsided and closed the brain fuck program. Coming back to her senses Louisa felt the aftergow of her orgasm and two fingers pushed deep into her cunt. She looked around and was irritated, how she got into that position and how the got an orgasm. The last minutes were missing in her brain but the fact that she had an orgasm was still present.

Sam disconnected from the girl and archived the pictures and the video he had taken from her. He closed the session for the day and disattahced the device from his neck. Damn, that was a hell of a girl he thought, and fore sure, he would visit her again.

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Reply #1 on: February 04, 2022, 06:22:52 AM
This was a nice little story. It's a good premise for a longer tale. It is well described how the system is hacked. And how the device is used.  It was also unusual to read something where only a third or so is dedicated to sex. Not good or bad just different than most stories on this site.
Just a thought. And I know people in glass houses shouldn't throw stones. But I would suggest you run the story through an editing website. ( I am using one to write this.)  It would likely catch some of the errors. It might make the story a bit better. And isn't that why we post here, to get better as writers. 
Keep writing and maybe others will also critique. 

I like the idea that a voice can just go somewhere, uninvited, and just kinda hang out like a dirty thought in a nice clean mind. Maybe a thought is like a virus,  it can kill all the healthy thoughts

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Reply #2 on: February 04, 2022, 06:42:19 AM
I would suggest you run the story through an editing website. ( I am using one to write this.)

I've heard of spelling and grammar checkers, but not online editors. What's the name of the site you're using?

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Reply #3 on: February 04, 2022, 01:52:17 PM
I use two websites before every story post.  First Grammarly for grammar and spelling. And Hemingway Editor for clarity and keeping the story more readable. Both are free only thing to be aware of is Grammarly stores the story if you leave the site and come back. As far as I have found Hemingway does not. (I don't sign in)

I like the idea that a voice can just go somewhere, uninvited, and just kinda hang out like a dirty thought in a nice clean mind. Maybe a thought is like a virus,  it can kill all the healthy thoughts

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Reply #4 on: February 04, 2022, 02:06:22 PM
I use two websites before every story post.  First Grammarly for grammar and spelling. And Hemingway Editor for clarity and keeping the story more readable. Both are free only thing to be aware of is Grammarly stores the story if you leave the site and come back. As far as I have found Hemingway does not. (I don't sign in)

Thank you for that very helpful response. I've come across the "Grammarly" name in ads embedded in YouTube videos. Hemingway Editor is new to me.

I'll make a point of checking out both, to see what kind of problems they flag, and what kind of suggestions they offer.

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Reply #5 on: February 05, 2022, 02:07:21 PM
I'm very sorry, that my english ist not the best all the time. It's not my native language and I'm off school for years. so please don't judge me too hard...

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Reply #6 on: February 05, 2022, 03:29:09 PM
No judgement. I thought you might like to know there are sites that will help since English is not your native language.

I like the idea that a voice can just go somewhere, uninvited, and just kinda hang out like a dirty thought in a nice clean mind. Maybe a thought is like a virus,  it can kill all the healthy thoughts

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Reply #7 on: February 05, 2022, 03:41:17 PM
Always wondered what the other sex feels when they have their O.  Speaking with guys I've been with, they all explain it a little differently. Wouldn't it be great if we could experience it just once.  Someone get cracking on this 'device' idas.


Commander, I just noticed you've been here since Feb 15 2008.  I think you may be the oldest active member that is a "new pervert".   I'm giving you a premature Woo (#4) for your upcoming 14th anniversary as a member.

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Reply #8 on: February 05, 2022, 11:51:45 PM
Always wondered what the other sex feels when they have their O.

The same thing has crossed my mind many times. I worked the concept into one of my novels. Weird things happen to the heroine and get weirder. She begins to experience fugues during which she finds herself inside the minds of different people in different times. Two or three of them are men, and she 'enters' one of them in the boudoir of a high-class Victorian prostitute. Fun and games ensue.

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Reply #9 on: February 06, 2022, 12:31:28 AM
Always wondered what the other sex feels when they have their O.

The same thing has crossed my mind many times. I worked the concept into one of my novels. Weird things happen to the heroine and get weirder. She begins to experience fugues during which she finds herself inside the minds of different people in different times. Two or three of them are men, and she 'enters' one of them in the boudoir of a high-class Victorian prostitute. Fun and games ensue.

I’ve always loved the movie Brainstorm (1983) with Christopher Walken and Natalie Woods. It was actually the last movie she made, before her tragic death.

The movie centered on a research team’s efforts to perfect a device that directly records and replays the sensory experiences and emotional feelings of a subject, sort of like the discs that Neo sells on the black market at the beginning of the Matrix.

Of course the company and the military want to monetize the device, and trouble ensues.

Near the beginning of the film, one team member, Gordy, has sexual intercourse while wearing the recorder, and shares the tape with colleagues, including Hal. Hal splices one section of the tape into a continuous loop orgasm, which results in a sensory overload that sort of fries his brain, leading to his forced early retirement.  He almost fucked himself to death.

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Reply #10 on: February 07, 2022, 10:09:10 AM
Commander, I just noticed you've been here since Feb 15 2008.  I think you may be the oldest active member that is a "new pervert".   I'm giving you a premature Woo (#4) for your upcoming 14th anniversary as a member.

I have never been the one to participate in discussions on forums. I found that page while searching for some good stories and at a time I wrote my first storie at all an didn't knew a better place to post it. So I use this forum to let you participate with my stories. Hope it is OK for you, that I don't write much other stuff at all...

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Reply #11 on: February 07, 2022, 10:30:16 AM
I’ve always loved the movie Brainstorm (1983) with Christopher Walken and Natalie Woods. It was actually the last movie she made, before her tragic death.

The movie centered on a research team’s efforts to perfect a device that directly records and replays the sensory experiences and emotional feelings of a subject, sort of like the discs that Neo sells on the black market at the beginning of the Matrix.

I'm partial to the trapped-in-someone's-brain sci-fi genre. The most disturbing story I ever read (I'm sorry I can't remember the author or title) was about a man in a diner who finds himself being ogled by a chubby teenage girl. The girl somehow manages to suck him into her mind and keep him prisoner there. The description of the girl's fantasy world, in which she sees herself as a man-enslaving sex-bomb, is disturbing. I can imagine someone going mad in a place like that.

You are just a thought that someone, somewhere, somehow feels you should be here.


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Reply #12 on: February 10, 2022, 01:59:09 PM
Always wondered what the other sex feels when they have their O.  Speaking with guys I've been with, they all explain it a little differently. Wouldn't it be great if we could experience it just once. 

I 100% agree!



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Reply #13 on: February 12, 2022, 01:50:56 AM
I'm giving you a premature Woo (#4) for your upcoming 14th anniversary as a member.

#5 from me, another 13 year member.