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Offline Lostforkate

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on: October 17, 2013, 12:03:19 PM
A Tattered Rose

Is more precious than any other

A rose is to be watered, fed, and nurtured
A rose has green leaves and the petals are red
A rose will be cut and placed in a vase
A rose is to be perfect in its place

I found a tattered rose on a glance
I then touched and sniffed its fragrance
It smelled of beauty, with petals asunder
Why is this rose making we wonder?

Was this rose shared without care?
Was this rose loved beyond repair?
Did this rose love back despite its wear?
In its splendor, it was not treated fare.

This rose reminds of what you are to me
I want to fix you but I know you are free
I am angry at those who did not care
Harmed you, left you, your soul bare

You are to share, and you are loved
As I pick up this rose, most beloved
I will wrap the rose in lace
And find it a crystal vase

You are perfect as you are
Your existence is stronger
Friendship will never leave
And let us never grieve

And a tattered rose is more precious that any other








« Last Edit: October 17, 2013, 12:10:57 PM by Lostforkate »


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Reply #1 on: October 17, 2013, 12:07:09 PM
Wow, that is pretty deep man........Thank you


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Reply #2 on: October 17, 2013, 02:52:49 PM
A beautiful poem from deep within, thank you for sharing


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Reply #3 on: October 18, 2013, 09:30:52 AM
Thanks, I definitely feel better now that expressed that in words.


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Reply #4 on: October 18, 2013, 11:40:07 AM
That was beautifully written, plain to see it was penned from the heart.  Thanks so much for sharing it with us.


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Reply #5 on: March 08, 2014, 03:10:30 PM
Profound poem. Now I wonder at the object of which it was written.

Sure I'm crazy! It's the only thing that keeps me from going insane!

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Reply #6 on: March 08, 2014, 03:18:51 PM
Lovely words... meaningful and written with absolute feeling... great work... thanks for posting...

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Reply #7 on: October 23, 2014, 04:24:23 AM
Revisiting this, I attempt a draft of my reflection,

parted in good will
i treasure you still
"may we never grieve"
ironic, i have no relief

mutually we loved
mutually we parted
my soul has searched
my soul now parched

do we honor a promise?
are our hearts honest?

hmmm...some questions I need to ask myself...
« Last Edit: October 23, 2014, 04:36:36 AM by jondalart »


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